Score: 9

"Good Work."

submission: 2 - The Story of Khale

date: May 10, 2008

Great Skill, Keep improving.

I just watched all your work online about Khale and I would say it has a good chance of getting bigger. Surely you will develop better skills, but you are certainly skillful already, and your style is captivating.

At the Khale trailer, however, the lack of a coese "trailer-storyline" made me a little disappointed, but your overall work is balanced by your art. Maybe someone else to help the scripts, just so you can grow until a bigger set of supporters. I know myself how much time you must spend on each episode, and that's really a problem.

I look forward to your future works, especially about this series.

Good Luck.

Score: 9

"Such a Fine Work..."

submission: Mad Vlad II: Revamped

date: May 7, 2008

Really good work, I congratulate you.
You did I fine job in all means.
Sound was really integrated with the scene, thanks to those great Audio artists.
I enjoyed the game over-all and played it all the way till the end.
I was a bit disapointed about Vlad's "Bandicoot Tornado" : I would have chosen a darker role to the story itself, and that would need a diferrent attack system.
There were minor glitches, as usual seen on a one-man-army production.
The design was cool, but I believe it could be better. If you just had more "eye-candy" at the cutscenes, I believe it could grow to another stage of quality.
Anyway, to conclude it, I believe it was a great attempt, even tho it has way to improvements.
I hope this kind of game quality becomes more common at NG, maybe opening a new phase for amateur game developing.

And don't you dare to not make another project as big as this one, or even bigger! I advise you!

Best of Luck.

Score: 9

"Great Job"

submission: Charlie the Unicorn 2

date: April 16, 2008

It's certainly a "full-production", with great drawing all the way to good voice acting.
Since this is a review, I believe I should point out what I think deserves an "upgrade" : I think that the ending could have been greater if you had mixed up some previous jokes, delivered them all at once, and quickly ended the story. I feel the ending as a bit empty. Anyway, good work, keep up.

Score: 9

"Good."

submission: Cosmic Trail 2

date: April 1, 2008

Hey good work. Simple, but well-made. Keep it up.

-Grifo

PS: I thought Souled was graphic designer. =)

Score: 3

"You shouldn't have released it yet..."

submission: Super Smash Squares

date: April 1, 2008

I suggest you forget the square idea. It's not that captivating, believe me. And you don't need " a little better art" -- you need something totally different if you wish it to be played.

Still, you're making a good work, so keep it up.

Score: 10

"Good Work."

submission: Nix Timelapse

date: March 30, 2008

I don't know if you're aiming for a "scary" feel for his face, but if you are, I suggest putting it more like a mask. Cute things can be the most creepy ones if well done.